Thursday, 14 May 2015

Walt create a show but don't Tell the story

I was sweating as I ran down the step hill. A pain shot through me on the second lap. I crossed the down hill road and ran across the muddy field. The mud  on the field wasn't any mud it was yucky sticky icky mucky mud.  I ran around the turf and reached the finsh line. I enjoyed running the first lap but the second lap wasn't the same feeling as the first


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  1. That is really funny with your finger in the picture how did you get the arrow and the me in it.

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    1. I got the arrow from stickers (in the pack with the pic collage logo on it) and the me on text. Thank you for commenting

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  2. You have done a wonderful job. It looks like you are going to leap from a log! My last house I had a log under the steam. Why did you leap over grass?

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  3. 1, I'm not leaping up in the air 2,thank you and 3, I don't know there was a log!

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