Thursday, 5 June 2014

Daley the unicorn

Once upon a time, there was a unicorn named Daley. Once he brought a pizza, it was burnt black. So he went to a saber tooth tiger and said "Can I have a pizza please?" But the saber tooth tiger said "sorry I don't have any", Ask Mr Hedgehog."ok"said Daley. So he searched for mr hedgehog. He asked him for pizza "sorry Daley, I don't have any go ask your dad". So Daley went to his dads and asked for a pizza but his dad said "sorry no pizza" so he went to ask his mum and guess what? His mum gave him pizza.
THE END!

4 comments:

  1. Your story is nice. I like that your characters are animals. You wrote a lot of words.
    Your friend, Haruko

    ReplyDelete
  2. What a good story! Daleys mum is the best !

    ReplyDelete
  3. thank you Haruko, from Charlice

    ReplyDelete
  4. I like your story Charlice, maybe tonight will have pizza, love dad xx

    ReplyDelete