Once upon a time, there was a unicorn named Daley. Once he brought a pizza, it was burnt black. So he went to a saber tooth tiger and said "Can I have a pizza please?" But the saber tooth tiger said "sorry I don't have any", Ask Mr Hedgehog."ok"said Daley. So he searched for mr hedgehog. He asked him for pizza "sorry
Daley, I don't have any go ask your dad". So Daley went to his dads and asked for a pizza but his dad said "sorry no pizza" so he went to ask his mum and guess what? His mum gave him pizza.THE END!
Your story is nice. I like that your characters are animals. You wrote a lot of words.
ReplyDeleteYour friend, Haruko
What a good story! Daleys mum is the best !
ReplyDeletethank you Haruko, from Charlice
ReplyDeleteI like your story Charlice, maybe tonight will have pizza, love dad xx
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