Thursday 14 May 2015

Walt create a show but don't Tell the story

I was sweating as I ran down the step hill. A pain shot through me on the second lap. I crossed the down hill road and ran across the muddy field. The mud  on the field wasn't any mud it was yucky sticky icky mucky mud.  I ran around the turf and reached the finsh line. I enjoyed running the first lap but the second lap wasn't the same feeling as the first